Second Critical Summary

The second relevant article I found is a critical review by August Bourre, who hails from a reputable, but fairly unknown book blogging website called The Vestige. The review is short, sweet and to the point, and contains no smartly-worded speculations or theories on themes and messages. However, it was the only article I could find that was in any way negative about this seemingly untouchable book. Bourre states that while he doesn't hate the book he "Not sorry I've read it, but I wouldn't ever actually say to someone 'Hey you should read this book'" (Bourre 1). He lists the main plot mechanics, which he dubs cliche and overused, particularly the fact that the book revolves around a broken family living in isolation, a death in the family and an abusive spouse. However, it is not for these reasons that Bourre does not particularly care for Fall On Your Knees. Bourre in fact claims that the real reason the novel does not live up to its high praise is the fact that it drags on and on; It is much too long for this critic's taste. The reviewer does praise the first half of the story, especially the death of Kathleen, which he describes as being "bold...exactly the sort of thing that could have made Fall On Your Knees great" (Bourre 1). However, Bourre insists that Kathleen's life is never really over, and she haunts the rest of the story with her unneeded presence. He also is quick to point out the MacDonald's book is repetitive, a quality I must admit that I have noticed, even in the first few chapter that I have read. The ending is described as being predictable and too obvious.

PS no feedback on the first summary...am I doing this right?
Riona confused.